so, turns out many of my roads lead to silicon valley. my bestest ever college friend and roommate's boyfriend has a bunch of start-ups, and they all pretty much rock. i'm not sure how much i can say before i ask him for permission to blab, er, i mean, blog. but lets just say the product of one of them is awsome.
it got lost in the verbage in his vision statement. i made fun of him for it and told him what was wrong with it, and he thought i was trying to get him to hire me to rewrite it! well, whatever my motive (mostly to just talk some smack like i know my shizzle) i said i'd do it.
that ish is hard! not only did i have to pretend to be him, kinda, i also had to figure out what IS the vision of the company and then what's a BETTER way to say it. once again, SO much easier to criticize.
then my revision is like